πŸ“• subnode [[@maya/agora chapter]] in πŸ“š node [[agora-chapter]]
  • #push [[agora chapter]] deadline today, let's see how far I get! today I hope to start early and finish late.
    • General [[patterns]] identified by the editors
      • #G1 too many links / links which aren't explicitly wikilinks
        • Strategy: cut links by 50%, add back [[wikilink markers]] for all remaining links (makes me "pay for them" in a way)
      • #G2 should address the reader of the book more than the user of an Agora
      • #G3 lacking information on similar initiatives/prior work
      • #G4 should be less of a manifesto and more a concrete description of the system that integrates PKGs
      • #G5 lacks cohesion, add transitional paragraphs
      • #G6 repetition
      • #G7 Agora discussed as having agency (might be OK, but might also be confusing)
      • #G8 use of bullet points which should be written as long form text
  • #push [[agora chapter]] is my top priority today
    • tour the agora
      • take screenshots
        • add two or three to the doc
        • file bugs :)
    • resolve more comments
      • and more
      • and more :)
  • #push [[agora chapter]]
    • my next [[drishti]] -> [[2022-12-04]] is the [[deadline]] for the next iteration
    • answer [[editors]]
      • write email
    • start going through comments and incorporating learnings
    • note that UI improvements can yield more interesting screenshots
      • but at least one screenshot of an agora graph is long due
  • #push [[agora chapter]]
    • my next [[drishti]] -> [[2022-12-04]] is the [[deadline]] for the next iteration
    • answer [[editors]]
      • write email -- this was sent on [[2022-11-27]] in the end
      • answer follow up about the meeting, sounds nice
    • start going through comments and incorporating learnings
    • note that UI improvements can yield more interesting screenshots
      • but at least one screenshot of an agora graph is long due
      • ;)
  • #push [[agora chapter]]
    • talked to the editors about open comments/suggestions, will now batch resolve a lot of them :)
    • finish resolving unlinked suggestions to improve readability end to end
    • add references / move towards 'no open TODOs'
  • #push [[agora chapter]] next steps
    • read George's email.
      • end of week as deadline for all, then we need to....
        • work on updated abstracts and...
        • start on the Markdown port.
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