π subnode [[@flancian/all watched over by machines of loving grace]]
in π node [[all-watched-over-by-machines-of-loving-grace]]
all watched over by machines of loving grace
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a [[poem]]
- by [[richard brautigan]]
- part of the [[poetry collection]] of the same title
- see subnode by [[neil]] for the full text
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a [[poetry collection]]
- a [[subset]] of [[The Pill versus The Springhill Mine Disaster]]
- [[list]]
- [[wp]] https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/All_Watched_Over_by_Machines_of_Loving_Grace_(poetry_collection)
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[[go]] http://www.brautigan.net/machines.html
- with the titular [[poem]] in it and 31 others
- might 32 (2^5) have significance?
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[[meta]] the following section assumes [[auto push]], which I haven't implemented yet :)
- once it's implemented, each node in the following list should get the children blocks automatically transcluded
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[[the beautiful poem]]
- [[phallocentric]]
- didn't find it beautiful, but hey, at least it's honest
- sexual in nature
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[[december 24]]
- didn't get it, but I like how these are short
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[[milk for the duck]]
- sexual in nature
- seems to be about lack of self confidence after not having sex for 20 days
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[[november 3]]
- echoes of [[frank o'hara]]?
- "there's a pretty girl I want to look at" -- [[richard brautigan]] was all about the ladies
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[[flowers for those you love]]
- about [[venereal diseases]]
- a bit like a [[psa]]
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[[san francisco]]
- [[found object]]
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[[star hole]]
- I like this one
- "I sit here / on the perfect end / of a star / watching light / pour itself toward me"
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[[love poem]]
- seems there's an ironic vein, as this poem is about not-loving
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[[I lie here in a strange girl's apartment]]
- [[ladies man]] strikes again
- dedicated to [[marcia pacaud]]
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[[it's raining in love]]
- I like this one
- "or perhaps i start to examine, evaluate, compute what I am saying"
- "in other words / I get a little creepy"
- "it's raining somwhere, programming flowers / and keeping snails happy"
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[[hey! this is what it's all about]]
- "it makes me want to write poetry"
- [[our beautiflu west coast thing]]
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[[widow's lament]]
- short
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[[december 30]]
- about a [[fart]]
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[[lovers]]
- "put her in a low brass bed"
- women aren't very active in many of these, perhaps I'm biased by the phallocentric opener but Brautigan feels a bit objectifying?
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[[a mid-february sky dance]]
- I liked this one, this feels more participative (a proper dance)
- "dance toward me, please, as if you were a star / with light-years piled on top of your hair, smiling"
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[[hey, bacon!]]
- [[desire]]
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[[after halloween slump]]
- [[magic]]
- [[hollywood]]
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[[it's going down]]
- "magic is the color of the thing you wear"
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[[albion breakfast]]
- written to go with a [[found object]]
- [[susan morgan]]
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[[ladies man]]
- lived without a refrigerator
- "physically he was none too attractive, but he was [[charming]]"
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[[comets]]
- "there are comets / connected to chemicals / that telescope / down out tongues / to burn out against / the air"
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[[the pomegranate circus]]
- "I feel like a drowned king / at the pomegranate circus"
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[[my nose is growing old]]
- "I'm 31 / and my nose is growing old"
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[[at the california institute of technology]]
- [[bored]] on a rainy day while poet-in-residence
- clearly pre internet
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[[your catfish friend]]
- pre [[catfishing]]
- "I'd love you and be your catfish friend"
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[[karma repair kit: items 1-4]]
- liked it
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- "get enough food to eat, and eat it"
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- "find a place to sleep where it is quiet, and sleep there"
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- "reduce intellectual activity and emotional noise until you arrive at the silence of yourself, and listen to it"
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[[all watched over by machines of loving grace]]
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a [[banger]]
- taken straight (without irony), it embodies technological optimism and makes me think of the [[agora]]
- [[cybernetic meadow]]
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[[cybernetic forest]]
- "where deer stroll peacefully / past computers / as if they were flowers / with spinning blossoms"
- [[cybernetic ecology]]
- [[robert gangeware]] "American poets seldom portray the happy marriage of technology and the natural world. Thus the optimism of the following poem is somewhat uniqueβunless the reader detects [[irony]], in which case the poem joins [[the mainstream of antitechnological American verse]]."
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[[charles perry]] "The [[robots will do all the work]] vision of [[utopia]] was certainly widesread, the subject for instance of Richard Brautigan's famous poem, 'All Watched Over by Machines of Loving Grace' and one of the recurring ideas in the [[Leary-Snyder]] debate in [[Oracle No. 7]]."
- this seems like a reference to [[san francisco oracle]]
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[[a good-talking candle]]
- "listened to its comfortable voice of light"
- [[kasina]]
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[[nine things]]
- "knows four other things / one is the color of your hair"
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[[a lady]]
- [[highway 101]]
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[[let's voyage into the new american house]]
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[[doors]]
- "that want to be free from their hinges to fly with perfect clouds"
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[[windows]]
- "that want to be releases from their frames to run with the deer through back country meadows"
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[[walls]]
- "that want to prowl with the mountains through the early morning dusk"
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[[floors]]
- "that want to digest their furniture into flowers and trees"
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[[roofs]]
- "that want to travel gracefully with the starts through circles of darkness"
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[[doors]]
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a [[banger]]
- a [[film]]
π stoas
- public document at doc.anagora.org/all-watched-over-by-machines-of-loving-grace
- video call at meet.jit.si/all-watched-over-by-machines-of-loving-grace